Diggin it! A very nice beat, sounds like it belongs in a club scene! But a particularly tense one. Would certainly fit the feel!
Diggin it! A very nice beat, sounds like it belongs in a club scene! But a particularly tense one. Would certainly fit the feel!
Thanks man! I appreciate the kind words!
Well done! I like how you've pieced everything together and gave it such a dark brooding tone just like from the story! Good work :D !
Thanks you!!!!
This was an awesome remix man! You kept the creepy vibe with it and everything! Very cool mix and well done :D
Thank you :)
An epic adaptation of my tale! It captures the emotional toil from this part of the story, I absolutely love it. The mixture of a fantasy story with a thick electro song, I hadn't ever thought about that before but you've brought it to life with that mixture my friend. The beat is lively, it fits the theme so well, and it flows so smoothly. Excellent work!
I appreciate the kind words man! I could not have done it without your help and I hope it helps showcase your talent some!
Excellent use of effects and very well mixed! I love the style this is done in, sounds just like an ad you'd hear today. The audio quality is also extremely superb!
The only thing I would say is that a few of the vocals sounded slightly distorted or were tough to understand (just due to the effect/background music or noise) but all in all, a solid and well done job!
Thank you. This was my second major VO job i was recruited to do. I will take look at the areas you said and see if i can clear it up.-Updated hope it sounds better.
*Pros*
- Pretty good! Not a bad batch of sample lines.
- Great audio quality, very crisp and concise.
*Cons*
- I would say focus just a slight bit on more annunciation for some of the longer lines and slow down. The first one was perfectly timed but a few after that felt slightly hurried.
- Just a personal preference but perhaps a slight bit more variety in emotions/line types.
Overall very clear, no background noise, and an easy on the ears voice! Good work :D
Thanks for the constructive feedback. This was my 1st attempt at making any voice demo at all (basically as soon as I got the recording technicalities figure out), and it's outdated now (2 years old).
I'm due for a revamped demo with more recent examples. I'm not a classically trained singer, thespian, or voice actress, but it's tips like these that have helped me continually improve. So, thanks again for taking the time to mention the pros & cons, from your perspective.
Cheers!
Hello! My name is Carl and I am a voice actor, writer, musician, artist, video editor, graphic designer, and about anything else creative you can think of! I love taking on different projects and seeing how I can put my own unique spin on things.
Age 33, Male
Jack of All Trades
USA
Joined on 5/29/05